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Review outreach kit

Updated
2026-05-29

Tools for seeding the first 20 reviews on superiorwatertruckparts.com. Reviews are the highest single-lever CRO improvement available to us (+35-55% add-to-cart per Baymard), but they require real human outreach to seed.

This kit hands Andrea (or whoever runs sales follow-up) everything they need to make the asks.


Target

20 published written reviews in 14 days. Realistic personal-outreach conversion is 25-40%, so target reach-out count is ~60 customers to net 20 reviews.


Customer-pull query (run against QuickBooks)

Pull the top 60 customers by paid invoice total from the last 12 months (excluding 5–S Superior Parts internal QB ledger and any one-off "Customer:Job" entries that aren't real customers).

In QuickBooks: Reports → Sales → Sales by Customer Summary → date range Last 12 Months → sort by Total descending → take top 60.

Export columns: - Customer name - Primary contact name (look up in Customer Center if not on report) - Phone number (mobile if available) - Email - Total spend (12 mo) - Top product purchased (informs the review-ask scripting)

Save the list as D:\claude_www\projects\website_design_manager\swtp-products\data\_review-outreach-list.csv (do not commit — contains PII).


Email template — first ask

Subject line A/B options (use A by default; switch to B if reply rate is under 25%):

  • A: Quick favor — 30 seconds for a review?
  • B: Brandon at Superior — could you help me out?

Body:

Hi [first name],

[Andrea / Brandon] here at Superior Water Truck Parts. You bought a
[specific product or build — pull from invoice] from us in [month
year], and I wanted to reach out personally to ask a small favor.

We just relaunched our parts catalog at superiorwatertruckparts.com
and we're asking our best customers (you're literally on the top-60
list) to leave a quick written review. It helps other fleet
operators find us — and Google ranks us higher when real customers
say real things.

Would you mind dropping 1-2 sentences? It can be as short as:
"Bought a B3Z pump in March, was at the yard before noon, works
great." Or whatever your honest take is.

Here's the link: [Yotpo / Trustpilot review URL]

Whether you do it or not — thanks for the business. Means a lot.

[Andrea / Brandon Tomkins]
Superior Water Truck Parts
(602) 437-3980
[email protected]

Why this works: - "You're on the top-60 list" — flatters without being smarmy. Implies they matter. - "Top fleet operators" — peer comparison. - "1-2 sentences" + included example — sets a low bar; people don't have to think. - "Whether you do it or not — thanks" — removes the social pressure that kills response rates.


Phone script — for the relationships strong enough to call

For the top 15-20 customers, a phone call beats an email (conversion ~50-70% vs ~30% for email). Use this:

"Hey [name], it's [Andrea / Brandon] at Superior Water Truck Parts.
You got a minute?

Real quick — we just relaunched our parts site, and I'm calling
through our top customers asking if you'd drop a quick review
online. Just a sentence or two about whatever your experience has
been.

I can text you the link right now if it's easier — or if you'd
rather just tell me what you'd say, I can post it for you and
just confirm with you it sounds right before it goes live.

Either way — totally fine if it's not a today thing. Just wanted
to ask.

How's everything been on the [last product / build] anyway?"

The last question converts the call from a one-sided ask into a real conversation. If they're happy, the review will follow. If they're not, you'll learn something more valuable than a review.


Follow-up sequence

Day Action
0 First ask (email or call)
4 If no reply, follow-up email: "Hey — just bumping this up in your inbox. 30 seconds is all we need."
8 If still no reply, last attempt: "Last bump from me. Totally no pressure — but here's the link one more time if you ever do get a minute."
14 Mark as no-response; move to bottom of list

Industry data: about 60% of "yes" responses come on the first email, 25% on the day-4 bump, 15% on the day-8 final. Three touches is the sweet spot — more is annoying, fewer leaves money on the table.


Reviews to seed if Yotpo's interface looks empty pre-launch

If the platform allows hand-imported reviews (Yotpo does, Trustpilot has stricter rules), use the existing relationship to ASK customers to email/text you a short review, then you post it on their behalf with their permission. Confirm verbatim before posting.

Do not write reviews yourself. Google + the platforms detect fake reviews and the penalty for getting caught is permanent loss of trust signal.


Tracking the outreach

Create a Google Sheet at D:\claude_www\projects\website_design_manager\swtp-products\data\_review-outreach-tracking.xlsx with columns:

Customer Contact Phone Email Top product First ask date Method Response date Review posted? Rating Notes

Update weekly. Goal: 20 published reviews by 2026-06-12.


Measurement (what to expect)

Per the audit's per-recommendation success metrics:

  • Add-to-cart rate on products with reviews: +35-55% vs. products without
  • Average rating target: ≥ 4.5/5
  • Review count target: 20 in 14 days, 50 in 60 days, 100 in 6 months

If average rating drops below 4.0 at any point, stop the outreach campaign and investigate — there's a systemic problem that reviews are surfacing, and accelerating publication will hurt rather than help.